i see seth everman, i rate 5

ooh that violin solo be hitting like something else

now im inspired to write a violin concerto

overall, it sounds good, but at certain times the brass instruments are a bit overbearing. try to turn it down a little to give room for other instruments. they may be accompaniments, but theyre important too!

also, the percussion also had got lost in the arrangement. try to turn it up a bit so that it can shine more through the instrumentation.

is that a damn virtual riot growl preset lmao
did you get the preset or did you make it yourself tho

also you just went full virtual riot on the last drop lmao

idk how to start my feedback so have this sentence that has no meaning whatsoever

1) the mix is clipping, leave some headroom for the instruments
2) the supersaw wubs are kinda lost in the mix at the drop, maybe make it a bit louder
3) the song have very little variation throughout, spice things up so that people don't get bored. for starters, maybe change the melody a bit as the drop progresses, or different chord progressions throughout the song so that it keeps the listeners at their toes

the fingers are a bit too large tho

other than that, pretty good art
nice perspective